Izindaba ezimfishane ezidumile

Izindaba ezincane zikaJuan José Millás ziyandiza

Izindaba ezimfishane: amagama ambalwa wezindaba ezinhle.

Ngabe ubhekile izibonelo zezindaba ezincane? Izikhathi ze-Intanethi zivumele ukuthi imibhalo emifushane noma emincane ibaluleke kakhulu phakathi kwalabo bafundi abasheshisiwe abagcina ingxabano yomugqa owodwa akuyona nje isisusa sokufuna ukwazi, kodwa futhi nethuba lokwenza eyakho inguqulo yaleyo ndaba efihliwe. imigqa "noma, kulokhu, amagama.

Le yindatshana encane, uhlobo lokulandisa mhlawumbe olungabukelwa phansi uquqaba oluhlanganisa umlando omude oqiniswe ngababhali abanjengoCortázar noma u-Augusto Monterroso, lelitshe lokugcina legumbi lohlobo ngenxa yomncanyana wakhe iDinosaur, omunye walabo ababhekwa njenge izindaba ezimfushane ezinhle kakhulu.

Kepha ngaphambi kokubabona, bonke abakhethiwe, sizophendula uchungechunge lwemibuzo ejwayelekile futhi ejwayelekile lapho sibhekisa ezindabeni ezincane. Uma unesithakazelo kule ndaba, unganqikazi ukuqhubeka nokufunda.

Ungangiphelezela kulolu hambo olufushane (futhi ngasikhathi sinye olujulile) lwezincwadi ngokusebenzisa okulandelayo 16 izindaba ezincane zabathandi besikhashana?

Yini i-micro-story? Izici ezivamile

Bhala indaba emfushane

I-RAE ichaza igama elithi microstory ngale ndlela elandelayo:

Indaba emfushane: Kusuka ku-micro- nasendabeni. 1. m. Indaba emfushane kakhulu.

Futhi mfushane kakhulu! Kuyisici esiyinhloko salolu hlobo lokulandisa, oluqukethe kuphela imigqa embalwa lapho umlobi kufanele aveze konke akufunayo futhi ashiye umfundi ejabule, ecabangisisa noma enomuzwa wokuthi ufunde okuthile okuhle futhi kufushane. Kulokhu kukhona ifayela le- isisho esidumile eza ukuveza okufanayo: "Okuhle, uma kufushane, kukuhle kabili"

Futhi noma ngabe njengoba besishilo ngaphambili, luhlobo olungabhekiwe kangako, iqiniso lihluke kakhulu. Kunzima kakhulu ukubhala futhi "usho" ngasikhathi sinye emigqeni embalwa. Ngenkathi sinenoveli noma izindaba esinamakhasi namakhasi wokulingisa umlingiswa noma eziningana, ukwakha indawo, ukuthuthukisa indaba uqobo lwayo, endabeni encane okufanele siyisho emigqeni embalwa, futhi sifeze okunzima kakhulu konke: ukuthi idlulisela okuthile kulabo abasifundayo.

Kubukeka kungumsebenzi olula, kepha mina uqobo ngiyakutshela ukuthi akusiyo neze. Kuthatha inqubo eningi nangesikhathi eside sokuzinikela ukwenza indatshana enhle enhle njengalezo esizobona ngokulandelayo. Kepha okokuqala, sizokutshela ukuthi ungayenza kanjani indaba encane, ukuthi ubheke ini, yimaphi amagama noma izinkulumo okufanele sizigweme nokuthi singaqala kanjani ngayo.

Uyenza kanjani indatshana encane?

Njengomthetho ojwayelekile, indatshana encane izoba nayo Phakathi kwamagama we-5 nama-250, yize singahlala sikuthola okuhlukile, kepha akuhluka kakhulu.

Ukubhala indaba encane kufanele sikhohlwe ukwenza isigaba ukuze sichaze okuthile okucacile, ngakho-ke ngokusobala sizoqeda lokho obekungaba yikho konke ukuthuthukiswa, isibonelo, kweleveli. Sasiya ku iphuzu eliyisihluthulelo noma uvuthondaba yokulandisa kwethu, lapho kuzoba khona ukuphenduka okungalindelekile okumangaza umfundi. Ngale ndlela, kuzofanele sikhohlwe ukuchaza ngokweqile. Le ndlela yokubhala izosisiza ukuthi sithole igama elifanele, kulokhu izichasiso ezichazayo ezifanelekayo, ukusho okuningi ngokuncane.

Ngokwenza amagama abalwe kakhulu, esizozama ukukusho kubaluleke kakhulu ku- ukukhetha isihloko. Ngeke kube yinoma yisiphi isihloko, kepha sizozama ukwenza lawo magama asesihlokweni asize ekuqedeni indaba yethu encane futhi siyenze ibe nenjongo nakakhulu uma kungenzeka.

Futhi-ke, uma kukhona amagama amancane endabeni encane, sizozama futhi ukudlala ukuthula y izimpawu zokubhala. Isibonelo, ezinye izindololondo kuya ngokuthi siyibeka kuyiphi ingxenye yombhalo, bangasho okungaphezulu kakhulu komusho ophelele.

Njengoba sishilo phambilini, ukwenza i-micro-story enhle kuyindaba yokuthola inqubo njengoba yenziwa kaninginingi. Ngalesi sizathu, futhi ngenxa yokuthi isilulumagama sabancane asikakhuli ngokugcwele, kujwayelekile ukubona ezincwadini zamabanga aphansi zicela izingane ukuthi zibhale izinkondlo ezimfushane noma indaba encane ngento ethile. Ngalolu hlelo sizama ukwenza abancane ukuthi bachaze okuthile (into, umcimbi, njll.), Ngamagama ambalwa abasakwazi ngaphandle kokusho okuningi.

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"Hlala, ngamtshela."

    Futhi ngamthinta.

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Lana njalo ngo-Ephreli nakuwo wonke uMeyi.

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-Ngicabange kanjalo yingakho ngiza.

- Yini ongayibuza yona, ngemuva kokubuyisa impilo yakho?

"Ngibuyisele izono zami," kububula indoda.

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Kunamanoveli okuthi noma kungabi yinde angakwazi ukuqala kuze kufike ekhasini lama-50 noma lama-60. Kwenzeka into efanayo nakwezinye izimpilo. Yingakho ngingakaze ngizibulale phambilini, Mnumzane.

I-apula, ngu-Ana MarĂ­a Shua

Umcibisholo odutshulwe ngu-William Tell's crossbow oqondile uqhekeza i-apula elizowela ekhanda likaNewton kabili. U-Eva uthatha ingxenye eyodwa anikele enye kumlingani wakhe kujabulise inyoka. Yile ndlela umthetho wamandla adonsela phansi ongakaze wakhiwe ngayo.

Izinsongo, zikaWilliam Ospina

"Ngizokushwabadela," kusho umfundisi.

"Okubi kuwe," kusho inkemba.

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