Ikhona lokuba wedwa
Ikhona lokuba wedwa iqoqo lezinkondlo ezibhalwe umlobi u-Antonio Moreno Borrego, oziveza ngaphansi kwegama mbumbulu elithi Toni Emebé. Umsebenzi washicilelwa ngoJulayi 27, 2004 yisikhungo sokushicilela iMaikalili. Ezincwadini zangaleso sikhathi, ababhali abaningi ngokwengeziwe bayalokotha bahlole imizwa yendawo yonke efana nokungabi nalutho kanye nokusesha incazelo.
Kulomongo, Ikhona lokuba wedwa ngu-Toni Emebé uyisibonelo esivelele sezitayela ezimbalwa zesimanje, ezifana sebenzisa ulimi lobunkondlo olungenangqondo futhi ukhiphe izimpawu zokubhala—ngisho nokuzisebenzisa kabi ngezikhathi ezithile—. Lesi sakamuva, ezimweni eziningi, ngokuvamile sihambisana nezaba zokuthi “izinkondlo zimahhala.” Okunye okuphawulekayo wukuba lula kombhalo, omngcele wokwehluleka okusobala ekusebenziseni izinsiza. Selokhu yakhululwa, leli bhuku alikaze lithole ukubuyekezwa noma ukugxekwa.
Ukuhlaziywa kwezinye izinkondlo ezifakwe ku Ikhona lokuba wedwa
"Ngowesifazane omkhulu / Ngomlingisi omuhle"
Nakuba kunzima ukukukholelwa, kwakumnandi.
Isikhathi engasichitha nawe ekuqaleni,
Wangiphatha kabi, washo ngokuziqhenya.
Futhi hhayi esikhundleni sokuzizwa ululazekile, ngokuphambene nalokho, ukujeziswa ngobumnene
Wangithukuthelela kakhulu,
Ukuthi awusakwazi ukukuthatha futhi wahamba,
Ngaphandle kokucabanga ngakho, ngikulandele ukuze ngikubuyisele,
Futhi lapho ubona ukuthi ngiseduze kwakho, wangibuka ngokudelela, wahamba.
Kodwa ukuphikelela kwami kwakungcono,
Angizange ngiphele amandla futhi ngikucasule
Angikwazanga ukuvumela owesifazane ukuba alahlekelwe
Ngesimilo nobuqotho ngaphakathi
Ngikude ngikuncenge ukuthi ungiphelezele, ngize ngikuncenge.
Awukwazi ukwaneliseka engangikuzwa
Ngathi ngifika ngakubona eduze kwami
Kwaba sengathi umzimba wami ungenwe injabulo.
Futhi kuyiqiniso ukuthi kwakunjalo, wayehamba nowesifazane omkhulu
Lezo zikhathi kwakungamelwe sizikhohlwe.
Futhi nakakhulu uma sizihlukanisa nabantu.
Ukuze sibe ndawonye mina nawe kuphela
Ukuze ujabulele inkampani yakho
I-Análisis
Ngaphambili, kubalulekile ukuqaphela ukuthi ukukhombisa amavesi amhlophe obuciko obuncane kuzosetshenziswa ihayifeni (-) futhi kulawo obuciko obukhulu kuzosetshenziswa imigqa (—).
Inkondlo yakheke ngezigaba ezinhlanu zobuciko obukhulu ezingalandeli iphethini engaguquki ngokobukhulu bazo (amaquartet ama-4 kanye ne-quintet engu-1) enamavesi amamitha aguquguqukayo asukela ku-hendecasyllable kuya kwamalunga angaphezu kwamashumi amabili.
Ukusetshenziswa kosonhlamvukazi ekuqaleni kwevesi ngalinye kanye nokuntuleka kwezitobhi kulishiya lingenambitheki. Lokhu kwanda ngokuthi akukhona ukuthi izimpawu zokubhala zikhishwa ngokuphelele, njengoba kukhona okhefana.
Kusukela ekwelapheni imilolozelo (A— A — / AABB / ABBA / ABBAA / ABBA) kanye nokungabi nandaba nokusetshenziswa kwama-assonances nongwaqa, kungacatshangwa izinto ezimbili: ukuthi kukhona ukuntula ulwazi lokusetshenziswa ngendlela efanele kongwaqa. amafomu ezinkondlo zakudala noma ukuthi umbhali ubefuna ukuphazamisa.
Ngokuqondene nendikimba, ivamile: uthando nobuhlungu benhliziyo. Mayelana nokuthuthuka kobunkondlo, kungathiwa impofu, ayingeni esingathekiso noma emifanekisweni, izehlakalo zivele zenzeke evesini ngalinye bese ziyiswa emlolozelweni ophoqwayo.
"NOMAn injabulo, inkohlisoU»
Kuhle engikuzwa emehlweni akho
Injabulo, inkohliso, inhlalakahle
Ngemva kwesikhashana njengokungathi ngozibuthe
Ungithuthe wangibeka eceleni kwakho
Angisakhumbuli noma bekuyimina yini
Noma ingabe wawungiguqule
Futhi ngangijabule kakhulu ngaleso sikhathi
Ngangifuna ukumisa isikhathi
Kodwa anginawo amandla
Onkulunkulu kuphela abenza lezo zinto
Njengawe, nkulunkulukazi wothando
Ukuthi okwemizuzwana uyithathele inhliziyo yami
I-Análisis
Le nkondlo yakhiwe ama-lyre quartts amathathu. Okusho ukuthi, ziyizigaba ezixubile ngokwemitha yazo—amavesi obuciko obukhulu obuhlanganiswe namavesi obuciko obuncane. Imvumelwano yayo ithi AA — – / — — A a / a A b B; okusho ukungathumeli kunoma yiliphi ifomu elaziwayo.
Izimpawu zokubhala zisakhishwa ekukhishweni, kodwa okhefana abakhona emavesini aqinisekisa lokho ("Ubumnandi, inkohliso, ukuphila kahle"). Osonhlamvukazi abasekuqaleni kwevesi ngalinye bayaphikelela. Itimu: uthando nokwenza izikhathi zenhlalakahle nenjabulo zihlale.
Akukabikho ukuphathwa kwenkondlo okuphawulekayo ngokwezinsiza, ngaphandle kokuqhathanisa umnyuziyamu nonkulunkulukazi.
"Umama nowesifazane"
Yini enye engingathanda:
Sakubona ubambe isandla sakho
Kusuka kowesifazane engimthanda kakhulu
Yini enye engingathanda:
Ukumamatheka nokuqhuma
Naleyo ntokazi ewubukhazikhazi
Yini enye engingathanda:
ukuthi beningabangane
Kokubili futhi wenze abangane abahle
Yini enye engingathanda:
Thanda omunye futhi uthande omunye
Ngale ndlela umphefumulo wami owaphukile wawuzophumula
Yini enye engingathanda:
Sengathi kungaba nokuthula nokuthula
Futhi ngaphezu kwakho konke uthando nobuqotho
Yini enye engingathanda:
Kunokushiya okwedlule okungenangqondo
Ukuze uthole ikusasa elithembekile
Yini enye engingathanda...
Ukwazi ukusho lokhu kumama wakho
Manje umfazi ongithandayo
Yini enye engingathanda...
I-Análisis
Le nkondlo yakhiwe ngama-lyre tercets angu-6 kanye ne-lyre quartet yokuvala. Imvumelwano yayo ithi – bb / – b B /- bb / – b B / – BB / – BB / a B b a. Kulokhu, iphethini yemvumelwano ecacile ingabonakala ku-lira tercets (- bb) ehluka kuphela kumitha yamavesi athile. Kuyadingeka futhi ukuqaphela ukuthi amavesi angenalutho, ngokulandelana, anemvumelwano nomunye nomunye nokuthi yivesi elifanayo elibuye libe yi-poetic motif ("Yini engingathanda kakhulu").
Itimu eyinhloko ukulangazelela.
Ukushoda kwegama elithi "Que" le leitmotiv kubangela umsindo, njengoba kwenza ukusetshenziswa kwamachashazi amane noma amahlanu ilandelana, izimpawu ezingekho olimini lwethu, nakuba singaphetha ngokuthi babefuna ukusebenzisa ezintathu ezaziwa (...).
Iziphetho ezijwayelekile
Ikhona lokuba wedwa, Ngokusobala, iqoqo lezinkondlo elingenangqondo. Kungatholakala ukuthi umbhali wayengenaye umhleli owayezomphelezela, futhi, uma wayenaye, umbhali cishe wayecela ukuthi akubhale kuhlonishwe, yingakho ukuba khona okuphawulekayo kwamaphutha ohlelo kuwo wonke umsebenzi.
Umbhalo ofundeka kalula futhi ongashoni. Kuyathakazelisa—futhi futhi kuyathakazelisa—ukuthi alukho ulwazi olubalulekile olutholakala ngomlobi, ngaphandle kwegama lakhe negama-mbumbulu.
Ezinye izinkondlo ezikhona eKhoneni Lokuba Sodwa
"amehlo akhe ayakhuluma"
Ukubukeka kwakhe kuyakhuluma,
Bacula ukunyakaza kwabo
Futhi unemizwa,
Akuchazayo ezinyathelweni zakhe
Phakathi kokumhlophe nesinamoni,
Iyakwazi ukushaqisa
Nokukujabulisa
Hhayi-ke, uyakukhohlisa
Unjalo nje
Uthambile futhi uqotho,
Mhlawumbe yingakho ngikuthanda
Futhi angeke isulwe emqondweni wami:
Ukuthi ngelinye ilanga kuyohamba
Ngiye kwenye indawo yokuphumula,
Kodwa kufanele ngihlale ngikhumbula
Yeka indlela engijabule ngayo futhi ngizojabula ngayo,
Inja yami.
"Ngizowagwinya ama-kiss akho"
Ngizokugwinya ukwanga kwakho,
Ngizolukhipha uthando lwakho,
Ukuze asuse ubuhlungu
ukuthi uyibethele emathanjeni ami
Ngokulula, ngihamba ngaphandle kobuhlungu,
Hhayi-ke, kufanele ngihambe ngezinduku,
Ukuze ngibone ukuthi ngingakwazi yini ukumelana
Ngize ngithole olunye uthando.
Ngizowuqeda umzwangedwa wami,
Ngizohlala enkampanini yakho,
Ukukhohlwa ngelinye ilanga
ukuthi naninobubi bami
Futhi ngiyethemba, uthando lwakho luyangikhohlwa,
Nakuba ubuhlungu benhliziyo
Ngisho ngaphandle kwesizathu,
Avalelise ngokushesha.
"Izinkambiso ezimisiwe"
Ziyizindinganiso ezimisiwe
Izintokazi ziyabazonda
Amadoda ayababaza
Uma uphuma ekamelweni
Qaphela uRosario
Ziyizindinganiso ezimisiwe
Uma udakwa
Qaphela intombazane yakho
Ziyizindinganiso ezimisiwe
Uma ukhala ngoba ungajabulile
Qaphelani makhosikazi
Ziyizindinganiso ezimisiwe
Uma uzizwa uthanda ukucula
Qaphela ngoPilar
Ziyizindinganiso ezimisiwe
Futhi ekugcineni imithetho
Ngiyabakhohlisa
Futhi ngibafundisa ukubekezelelana
Ngokuphikisana okwengeziwe
Ukuzikhukhumeza okungaka
Ziyizindinganiso ezimisiwe
"Ngifuna ukuthola isidleke"
Ngokwami ngijabule kakhulu
Ekutholeni isidleke
Kwangathi ingasinika imfudumalo, isikhose futhi isigcine simunye,
Ngaphandle kwalokho, ukube bekungenjalo, okwethu bekuyolahleka esikhathini esidlule
Futhi lezi akuzona izikhathi zokudelela
Uthando oluthandana ngokweqiniso
Ukuba ndawonye nje, ukuze sikwazi ukuphulula...
Hhayi-ke, hhayi ize, sibadala futhi ukuthomba kungemuva kwethu
Ngamanye amazwi, manje isikhathi sesifikile sokuthanda;
Ukumisa umbhedo
Khohlwa amaphupho
Futhi akufanele aphule, ukuze uqale futhi
Uma singabantu abadala kuzofanele sikukhombise,
Ngomthamo, ukuziqhenya futhi uma kungenzeka okuyize
Kodwa okungafanele sikunake
Yizingxabano eziqeda ubungane bethu
"Iziphi izinto ikusasa elinazo"
Yiziphi izinto ikusasa elinazo?
Kuvele ukuthi ngiya engadini
Ukuba nesikhathi esihle sokukufuna ngaphandle kwempumelelo
Kamuva ngishintsha izindawo futhi ekugcineni ngikuthola
Ngizwe injabulo enkulu,
Hhayi ngakubona ujabule ngaphelezela
Futhi ubugqoke ingubo enhle
Ngakolunye uhlangothi, lapho ningibona, wema
Ngiqagele, beningalindele ukungibona;
Kodwa ngibe nenhlanhla enkulu,
Hhayi-ke ngikubonile nomunye wesifazane.
Lokho bekuhlezi kusemqondweni wami...
"Ngiyabonga"
Ngalwazi ngawe uthando
Umcebo singazinika thina
Inani lothando lokumosha
Kungokwakho nje
Kahle wena uyisithandwa sami
Njengoba unjalo kimi
Futhi: ijele lami.
Nakuba ngingazi ukuthi ngingafakazela kanjani
ongathanda
Futhi awazi ukuthi ulinde kanjani
Malufike usuku olusha.
Ngezinye izikhathi, ukulala,
Ngicabanga ukuthi ngikubona eduze kwami
Futhi ngiyaphela
Ngalo lonke uthando lwami olunikezwe.